wow, cool i'm in the story lol (for those mystified people see last line). now i want to know what happened to alexis (lol don't we all) anyway this new chapter was realy cool so update soon please.

O, the plot thickens even further. Man, I love this story! Keep up the writing; I can't wait to see where this thing goes. Seriously, this story is great, and you've been doing nothing but a fantastic job on it.

P.S. check out my newest creation: Not so Happily Ever After.

First off I'd like to say that I love this story. The idea of the IAC is really cool. One minor thing, though I'd have to look back in the story to know for sure, I think you described Will two different ways. I think you described him once as having blond hair, and later as having black hair. I could be wrong though. I'm really looking forward to reading more of this.

Baxter

i love the romance scenes ;_; they're so sweet!

i am totally diggin this story, it has everything from love to angst, its greeat and you are a greeat writer. keep it up

Oh! I thought it was Alexa at the end, not Will- nice twist...

Fab as always :) Good contrast of scenes again- it makes the story more intense, love it, look forward to the next chbapter!

YAY! you wrote another one! (hugs computer)

This is so cool! i thought will was dead, but, as it turns out, he was possesed, who woulda thunk it? I plan on publishing a story of my own soon, it may sound a little like cupid's wolf at first, but i swear, the plot's sources are 100% alien to this site, scouts honour ;).

-Sighned... oh hell who has the energy?

P.S. when i DO publish, i would be honoured if you wrote a review for it... PLEASE?

P.P.S. How long are you gonna hold off on the Sy/alli v.s. alexis fight? common, write it, ya know ya want to.

P.P.P.S. write back please (makes puppy face).

Ah... Perfect. Thats all I can say, really. Just... perfect, and beautiful.

I love the ending...so beautiful...so romantic :) *sigh*

i really love this chapter!

I like the whole balls of light thing. you have great ideas! srsly

just...why did you cut if off when they were about to kiss D:

I absolutely love this story! you are a horrible person for leaving a cliff hanger like that. you better update soon or I will have to track you down.

HOLY OH MY GOD! this was the best storie i have ever, and i mea read, and ive read ALOT of books ( Im like the guy who always gets made fun of for reading alot in childrens shows lol. ) IT WAS SO FREAKIN AMAZING! i swear, i read it in like one sitting, just like that, a whole afternoon spent reading it like five times to look at the details. Its like the second femslash I have ever read (and the first time i actually looked up the term :).) You are an AMAZING writer, if you published this (and you should publish this, become a pro writer, have lots of children, and make other asperations of glory come true) I would have a paperback edition, and a hard cover edition, just to have them! I think you got me hooked on femslashes ;). Plus this is like the only one, holding aside a beutifully writen one by Briannathewriter ;), thats not about sex :P. If you dont update soon, i will stalk you *peeks into window with telescope* lol. Im gonna read all the romance novels on this site if you dont finish soon ( which would not be a good experience for me, some of these stories *shivers* scary people.) SO UPDATE SON!

-With much update wantingness, A Cupids Wolf Obsessive

P.S. I think i know you, I wish i knew your name, *does creepy wink*

aw is so cute...i wanna go there... wanna go with me? :)

Wow! That is such a beautiful idea- I was realy impressed with the quality of your writing in this chapter and I think you really captured some key truths about love... it's just beautiful (can't think of another good adjective- which is why I'm the reader and you're the writer!) :)

I also liked the way you really upped the suspence by juxtaposing the calm peaceful room where Sy and Alli are with the chaotic and dangerous room with all the fighting.

Basically, I really like this story, I like the way you write and I can't think of any 'con crit' because I lke it all!

Looking forward to the next update!

Come on! Come on! Get on with it!

I mean that in the sweetest way possible!

*Clears throat* I think you forgot to add the last paragraph of this chapter…

A little shorter then most of the chapters but for the most part it flowed nicely.

I like the conversation between mother and son…kinda throws the theme of the story at people; begging them to understand.

Heres to hoping we get a quick update! lol