Awesome story. A-freaking-MAZING-ing story! Loved every bit of it. I'm afraid I'm going to have to polietly demand a sequal lol. :)

Just finished reading the story.

It was very, very good. The idea behind it was incredibly creative and your writing was good as well. I think you might have had a couple grammatical errors, but I've forgotten what they were now. Anyway, it was good. Sequel please? :)

I completely adored this story, its plot and your writing. It really was great, thank you for sharing.

Aw, yay, what a happy story! Okay, not a happy story, but for about 2 chapters, I was worried about a sad ending! I'm glad there was a happy ending! Very fitting. I was very surprised by the ending. I think you could have extended the scene where Alli talks to Sanderson some more with some more explanations, because I was a little confused and had to reread some scenes to understand, but besides that, everything was pretty awesome! Thanks so much for such an awesome story! Very fun to read!

Bahahahahaha! I was planning on commenting on the whole story at the end, but I just had to comment on how friggin hilarious that little skit was. I love Will: "do I get to come back again?" -No, you're dead "Fuck". Hilarious. I honestly laughed out loud.

Okay gonna keep reading now...

This has to be the best story I've ever read on this site. You're an amazing author, and so creative. If I could write half as good as you, (or even finish a story) I'd be the happiest little author in the world. And I love the story with Jasmin and Eadel too. I know it says chapter one, but I'm reviewing the whole thing. I almost cried when Sy "died" I was like , "No! She can't die! No! Alli don't kill yourself! Sy can't be dead, no!" And the twist with Anderson, unexpected and totally amazing. Your cliffhangers though, I was like, grr! Okay, that's all. You're freaking amazing, and that's all there is to really say.

YES YES SEQUEL SEQUEL WE WANT SEQUEL! Hey great story i have to admit i was getting worried toward the end but im glad that everything worked out. a sequel sounds like a great idea.

Here's a idea: Abby goes to I.A.C., falls in love with what else another girl, all hell breaks lose, Abby, her love, and her moms save the day and they all live happily ever after.

Yes, you definitely should write a sequel with Abby's story! I really liked this story, although some elements reminded me of "Music to my Ears". And I'm not only thinking about the bandana...

This story was (simply put for my present inability to procure a better word from my mind) AMAZING!

Kept me hooked till the very end. I was up all night, until 3:30 am reading this. I loved the story, but towards the beginning I was almost put off by the apparent lack of commas, which really bugged me. But I stuck in there, and I'm glad I did.

I'd have to say the only thing you need to improve on is punctuation. Oftentimes you use that little "-" thing instead of proper punctuation, like commas or periods.

All in all, excellent story. I'll definetly be looking forward to the sequel, which I'm too lazy to read right now.

But you'll definetely see me around reviewing it sometime soon.

-Slashed

omg this story is freaking AWESOME

but i have to admit, you really need to work on the summary, it kinda put me off.

and you have a deviant art account? really? whats your name? because i have one too! have any artwork?

sequel is a DEFINITE yes and update soon! i cant wait rto see what you have in store..; :P

youre awesome

ciao

Sam

I can't believe it's finished... I just spent the last week totally hooked on this story, it's without a doubt the most amazing thing ever written! Fantastic plot, amazing characters... and I can't believe it's over!

This is definately gonna be an all time favourate! God, I love Sy!

Thank you so much for writing this! I'm gonna go read it all over again now lol

I wonder what other stuff you've written... (runs to your profile)

Ravens Wolf 23

hell yeah you should continue, I love your story and a story about Abby would rock. I do have some artistic ability but not so much as to make a comic, but I think I might do some fan art. I have an account on deviantart as well, HarleyQuinn57 is my name if you want to contact me.

wonderful and i do think she should have her own story it would probably be an awesome read D

*gasps and jumps around* omg! I would love to see more of this story. I enjoyed Cupid's Wolf so much and never wanted it to end. I think a sequel would be awesome!

As part of your many adoring fans, I agree.

"Could I please have some more, Sir?"

"More? MORE? YOU WANT MORE?"

Hell yes I do.