Reviews for Cupid's Wolf
Omok chapter 31 . 3/26/2008

Omok is VERY HAPPY about this. and CAN'T wait at all...

at least, till the "Love of Abby" shows up...and etc etc..things like that P


ABBY TO HAVE A STORY OF HER OWN PLEASE! (and no offense, let it be )
NothingInHerGlassGreyEyes chapter 31 . 3/26/2008
Okay. I started reading this yesterday night, and now [after many interruptions] I've finished it. It was definitely interesting.

A few times I had to go back and re-read a paragraph or so, because it seemed like you got the words "he" and "she" mixed up, but it was only 2 or 3 times. The fact that you added in some of the characters talking about you as if you were a part of the story caught me off guard. It was humorously refreshing though. I do think that it would be interesting for Abby to have a story of her own, as long as it differs enough from her parents'.

b.t.w, I had to explain to an older guy friend of mine how lesbians had sex, so I feel Sy's pain.

Overall, I think that it had a good story line, that, if you're interested in the beginning, it keeps you on your toes the entire time. I really didn't expect Sy to live, but after thinking about it, I knew she would. Hopefully my ranting will be of some help to you.
master of suspence chapter 31 . 3/26/2008
when i first got the email telling me that u have updated Cupid's Wolf i was surprised i thought you were done with it... but i was wrong you have to continue with it now after that last chapter it would be wrong to just leave it hanging like that you have to do a sequal! ~Alsye
MichelleMagly chapter 31 . 3/25/2008
OMFG! Abby totally NEEDS her own story! Dear God, I had forgotten how much I loved this whole plot and the characters. Hey, what is your deviantart account? I have one up there, and though I'm not the best at sketching, I am pretty talented with some unconventional means of art. I'd love to make a print or two after Cupid's Wolf.
Dean P Thomas chapter 31 . 3/25/2008
It's a nice touch.

And you know that I'd love to see a sequal.
looneyli91 chapter 31 . 3/25/2008
O_o; *bounces* Sequel, sequel, SEQUEL! *clears throat* sorry, lost my cool there for a second. I totally lol'd at the whole "having to explain lesbian sex" thing P it felt a bit cliched the way you had Sy say the whole power inheriting thing... but a sequel sounds like a kick-butt idea . (psst! If you need a beta, I'm your girl D)
Water Queen 23 chapter 31 . 3/25/2008
Please make a sequel. I want to see this story continued.
bloodyfangs chapter 31 . 3/25/2008
When I saw another chapter added I had to blink a few times! lol I dont have this story on alert but I do have it as a Fav, so heres to hoping my vote still counts for a sequel.
chibichoco chapter 31 . 3/25/2008
Wow! I was actually reading this again, but then I got the alert for a new chapter! Aww... That's so cute what she said in the MP3 player!

It made me laugh when she said "I haven't been this nervous since I had to describe how lesbians have sex"! XD

A sequel huh? If you want to write a sequel, I'll be happy to read it. :) You're a really good writer. XD
Lugiase chapter 31 . 3/25/2008
Wow, I wasn't expecting another chapter to this story.

I enjoy reading this story when it first came on fictionpress and I would totally love a sequel to it :D.

I bet it's gonna be just as interesting and exciting as Cupid's Wolf :D.
looneyli91 chapter 30 . 3/16/2008
...Wow... This is the first real story I've read here on Fictionpress, and I'm most definitely glad that it was this one. This story has left me near speechless, which is pretty hard to do most of the time cuz I'm a chatterbox with ADD P I like the parts where the characters just kinda randomly mention the author and none of the other characters gets it; that's pretty cool. Gah... I can't really think of much else to say, other than this is a kick-butt story and definitely going on my favorites list. Until later!

Omok chapter 30 . 1/30/2008
Lol! okay! the first review was a...mistake xD considering I wasn't smart enough to roll down the "chapter" list to see there's actually 30! not 20! *laughs* You don't know how mad i was...xD

for that, I'm sorry X

and now as for the story...I THINK THE ENDING WAS TOO SHORT! but it was CUTE/SWEET/GREAT none the other! and here I though rating M would have something a long the lines..of...*cough* NOT just because of mature language T-T

anyhow! WONDERFUL! story! *laughs* I would read it all over again if it didn't took me four hours P
Omok chapter 1 . 1/30/2008
-_-! why is the story labeled complete when it ISN'T? WHY CAN'T YOU FINISH IT? BUT YOU HAVEN'T UP DATED FOR 9MONTHS? *cries, goes crazy*

I know this may sound dumb, super dumb in-fact, but PLEASE! up date! T-T
kurai88 chapter 2 . 10/24/2007
this one's awesome too. and don't worry about the grammar mistake in 'music to my ears', it doesn't take away the readability of the story, so its probably more bother than its worth to fix it.

now i just wish i had a program to save all the chapters to stories off of fictionpress as well as fanfiction ... manually saving each one to read on my pc is REALLY tedious...

anyway, i'll go read more. great stuff so far. (why didn't you tell me about your stories earlier? lol, now i'm hooked)
Abel Akura chapter 30 . 9/15/2007
This has got to be one of the greatest stories I have ever read. I would love to see more stories about the I.A.C.
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