Reviews for Alice Will Always Have Two Lumps of Sugar |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha I stand corrected and it was even better because I didn't see it coming! You, my friend, are unpredictable! I really did like it, it was different and not something you'd normally come across :) -Tarver |
![]() ![]() ![]() This had me in tears... It was... Heart wrenching Something tells me Alice and Jay arent going to end up together though, as much I'd like them to... :'( |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved it loved it loved it! Amazing story. The ending was so cute with the pancake proposal ) ~Francine Brown |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww. this is so heartbreaking. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i can't believe he said Alice instead of Lia! |
![]() ![]() ![]() no i liked everything about this story. its perfect :) |
![]() ![]() so typical...and expected... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg! i loved it, loved it! It made me cry. This story is one of the best ever! Oh, boy now im gonna b thinkin about this all day. Wonderful! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! So good! So good! i loved it. aw poor Jay... stupid Lia! lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok, i just got back to reading this, and i love it! i love this story so much! i don't know how you do it but you make it feel like the reader is actually Alice. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is like THE ULTIMATE tear-jerker. and yet it is absopoolutely the best chapter of your whole story! i love it so much! thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey! :D so sweet! and you got me aching for some pancakes now! _Tina_ |
![]() ![]() ![]() really good but i think the ending didnt have to be so abrupt... still great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw sweet ending! I thought Jay would come back for her and they'd get together but i didn't expect him to ask her to marry him! Great story :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was such a cute story! A few parts of it reminded me of the Korean drama, Full House. Have you seen it? It's a great drama! I loved this story - but sometimes I felt like it was moving too fast and could use more detail. I like all of your characters, although Lia was somewhat confusing. Great job on this story! /shad |