Reviews for Alice Will Always Have Two Lumps of Sugar
Liquorice Allsorts chapter 12 . 2/6/2012
Hahaha I stand corrected and it was even better because I didn't see it coming!

You, my friend, are unpredictable!

I really did like it, it was different and not something you'd normally come across :)

-Tarver
Liquorice Allsorts chapter 11 . 2/6/2012
This had me in tears...

It was... Heart wrenching

Something tells me Alice and Jay arent going to end up together though, as much I'd like them to... :'(
Francine Brown chapter 12 . 9/6/2010
loved it loved it loved it!

Amazing story. The ending was so cute with the pancake proposal )

Francine Brown
xHopeLesSdReaMeRx chapter 11 . 10/14/2009
aww. this is so heartbreaking.
xHopeLesSdReaMeRx chapter 9 . 10/14/2009
i can't believe he said Alice instead of Lia!
sooner or later its over chapter 12 . 4/15/2009
no i liked everything about this story.

its perfect :)
ixxdbest chapter 12 . 4/20/2008
so typical...and expected...
Gabbyretro chapter 12 . 1/11/2008
Omg! i loved it, loved it! It made me cry. This story is one of the best ever! Oh, boy now im gonna b thinkin about this all day. Wonderful! :D
Gabbyretro chapter 6 . 1/11/2008
OMG! So good! So good! i loved it. aw poor Jay... stupid Lia! lol
Gabbyretro chapter 3 . 1/11/2008
ok, i just got back to reading this, and i love it! i love this story so much! i don't know how you do it but you make it feel like the reader is actually Alice. Great job!
teardropsONroses chapter 12 . 12/5/2007
this is like THE ULTIMATE tear-jerker. and yet it is absopoolutely the best chapter of your whole story! i love it so much! thank you!
miss-life chapter 12 . 10/22/2007
hey!

:D so sweet!

and you got me aching for some pancakes now!

_Tina_
cherrystraw chapter 12 . 10/20/2007
really good but i think the ending didnt have to be so abrupt... still great story!
pop-yur-fcukn-collar chapter 12 . 10/20/2007
Aw sweet ending! I thought Jay would come back for her and they'd get together but i didn't expect him to ask her to marry him!

Great story :D
shadowgirl618 chapter 12 . 10/20/2007
This was such a cute story! A few parts of it reminded me of the Korean drama, Full House. Have you seen it? It's a great drama!

I loved this story - but sometimes I felt like it was moving too fast and could use more detail. I like all of your characters, although Lia was somewhat confusing. Great job on this story!

/shad
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