Reviews for Alice Will Always Have Two Lumps of Sugar
OoohLookACat chapter 12 . 10/20/2007
*tear*

oh gosh

that was beautiful!

and im not lying when i say i actually have a tear in my eye

lol i loved every minute of this story

and that's why its going on my faves

:]

you did an awesome job writing it

izzie
SuperCUTEJensen chapter 12 . 10/20/2007
Yay, they are finally together, I'm so happy for them...I cant believe its over... you finished it...I loved the ending...
Carmel March chapter 12 . 10/20/2007
Wonderful ending to a wonderful story. Thank you so much for writing this, and I hope to see more from you in the future :)

~Carm~
miss-life chapter 11 . 10/9/2007
oh my god!

Great chapter!

even better enging!

and I'm so glad you update ;)

i hope you won't make us wait that long for the next one!

Keep up the GREAT work!

_Tina_
Icyglaze chapter 11 . 10/8/2007
Aw this story is so cute! :) I just started reading it today, but I'm in love with the characters already. :) You might want to consider getting a beta reader though, because I noticed a couple mistakes throughout the 11 chapters, I just feel that without the mistakes, I would've enjoyed the story so far a LOT more. :) But it's still great! Hope you update soon! :)
False-Facade chapter 11 . 10/7/2007
Ah god wats wrong with her! I feel so bad for jay and I feel like shooting luke...oh pls pls pls don't end the story with her NEVER seeing jay again that would be so effing horrible!
OoohLookACat chapter 11 . 10/7/2007
is that the last chapter?

it's very emotionally filled

and gosh

poor jay

the chapter felt a little all over the place though

but i guess it needed to be

sort of like it was mirroring jay and alice's emotions

hmm it was interesting though

izzie
Shadowform chapter 11 . 10/7/2007
OMGsh twta (that was totally awesome) and sad... sniff sniff whe had better go back to jay, man love is hard
Qalbu chapter 10 . 10/3/2007
nice one. D
Qalbu chapter 2 . 10/3/2007
this is good! i love it! D kudos!
UponAtlas chapter 10 . 9/23/2007
its a gppd story, please continue it

Does jay like her? is that why he acts so wierd?

i wish he does, because e acts all cool and cold and everything, and Alice is stll nice and caring
Gabbyretro chapter 2 . 9/15/2007
Ha!pure genious! i love it, and i love Jay! He's Hillarious!
Gabbyretro chapter 1 . 9/15/2007
ok i just started rading this story very interesting begginging. i like it!
Black Diamond chapter 9 . 9/3/2007
OH shit what did he just say? he's in alot of shit.
Carmel March chapter 10 . 8/19/2007
This is a truly wonderful story so far. You've got strong, likable characters, a clever storyline, and a great style of writing. And absolutely amazing dialogue skills. Like I said, truly wonderful :)

I can't wait for more of this.

~Carm~
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