Hm... Sounds an offal lot like Tarzan an Jane, but it's one of those stories that is coming to a point in it's life where it will be remade. I think that it's a good idea, but I'd watch your step and stay clear of the cliches that Tarzan will present to you otherwise the reviewers will go ape. *I couldn't resist.* But I like it. I think it's all up to you.

The Wyve

UM HECK YES CONTINUE!

loved it please continue

This fic seems really interesting and good so far. I deffinetly think you should continue

This sounds like Tarzan or Jungle book...what did it say in the first chapter of the book. Do you have a general idea of things you want to happen in this novel? Better make even a rough outline if you don't know what you're doing. Out wise the idea sounds interesting.

I am liking this. Quite interesting and I'm waiting for more.

Continue, this story sounds great. I want to see what happens.

The story sounds like it could be really good. It does move kinda fast but I hope that you continue.

it kinda moved fast, slow it down some, give some background. anyways the plot line is really good i really like it, write some more. it sounds really good, you did a damn good job.