Yaasssss! I love this story. God. Man. I'm a bit speechless lol

o-o lol

Adorable. : ) We can see where it's headed all along, but you make the ride so enjoyable. Love the characters and the world choices.

Okay, so I started this story and almost left because the love interest wasn't apparent right away. But I couldn't leave because I was already interested in the characters, curious about what was going to happen, and fully aware of how well written the story already was. So I kept reading, and I was certainly rewarded for it. This story was amazing. I loved every bit of it. I got so invested in the characters that I actually cried a little when Fumi asked to back to Taka.

Ah... Reading a good story is one of the best things in the world. I'm extremely glad I came across this wonderful, fantastic, inspiring piece of work. Thank you for the wonderful read, dear author. I wish you well in the future of your writing journey.

Aw Fumi realized it! epic :P really this is!

~T O~

i was planning on reading a bit of this story and then going to bed.

it's now two hours past the time i should have been asleep, and i've finished the whole story. hot damn, i'll be tired tomorrow... but that was so, so worth it.

so you're obviously a hide fan haha

im more of a miyavi lover

your story i gotta say is the best i've read so far on fictionpress

Oh so awesome! Loved it! Fumijin was adorable! And Tsukiyomi! Ah! I couldn't get enough. And thank you for the steamy lemon at the end. It was well done.

~Kuja~

I loved this! I wasn't entirely sure who he'd end up with, although I suspected it'd be Taka. The ending made me very happy...well, so did the whole story! It was so sweet.

This was lovely. Bravo!

This is the longest one-shot that I have read so far, so how about breaking its chapters up? I really enjoy the modern-day conversations among the deities.

love lov love this story. i think perhaps i read it some time ago, because it all seemed kind of familiar, but either way, i sincerely enjoyed it. i laughed, almost cried, and basked in the relief of the ending. was fantastic- faving this, now, fyi! :)

Lovely story :)

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OMAGA.

i was directed here from aminadaya (sp?)'s profile page, and ZOMG. I CANNOT BELIEVE I HAVEN'T READ YOUR STORIES BEFORE.

this is like, a piece of awesome. its MADE OF FREAKING AWESOMENESS. omagaa. i am speechless. (and drooling too, but you don't need to know that.)

omaga. amazing. more more. )

... i forgot what i was going to say, um, well. it was beautiful and fun. i just... nah, i'm good...