Reviews for this boy will have holes in his pockets |
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youngin-matomon chapter 1 . 4/9/2013 Heartbreaking. |
Feeshes chapter 1 . 8/25/2012 Can I just say that, I absolutely love this? I know you posted this years ago, but I hope things worked out. And that if you didn't get him, you're still happy, somewhere, with exactly where you are. Because your mind is one of the most beautiful things I've ever had the privilege of seeing into. :) Curtesy of:Brendon |
Ice Bubble chapter 1 . 8/16/2012 Good luck. |
heyitsstupidme chapter 1 . 7/9/2012 very personal and emotional. I enjoyed reading it. |
5ClawsReady chapter 1 . 11/13/2011 Girls like that exist. Because I'm sitting here reading this in my black button down shirt in a silver tie thinking about how I want guitar picks for christmas. I don't make love to guitars, yet, but I love them and I want to learn. How many reviews have you gotten so far that tell you how much hope you give people that maybe just want someone a little androgynous but who wants them to be sometimes a little androgynous too? Thanks, that was beautiful. I'm going to attempt to write a paper now and feel bad that it's not as well written. Smile, people think that you are wonderful. |
rooftopboys chapter 1 . 10/25/2011 this is fucking great. beautiful. |
ScreamWithMe chapter 1 . 3/25/2011 this boy will have messy handwriting. this boy never learnt to write in cursive. i will steal the scraps of paper that fall out of his pocket and read them secretly, wondering if the "you" is "me" or "him." i will read my poetry to this boy and then tell him i didn't write it. this boy won't believe me. this boy will let me write poems on his arm. this boy's body will be my notebook. I love this paragraph, because it reminds me of how true love is meant. |
nymphett chapter 1 . 3/22/2011 I'm reading this and it is beautiful and I'm crying because it's everything that I want and need and I just love you for putting in all down in perfect words. But on the other hand, fuck why isn't this my reality. |
AsianFlipGurl chapter 1 . 1/4/2010 Crap. That was noice. |
softersin chapter 1 . 6/4/2009 incredible, you definelty have a way with words. i think this is the kind of thing everyone wants/needs. great job. |
stolen hugs chapter 1 . 5/24/2009 mm, i like this: "i won’t write his name on them, but i’ll draw crooked stars on the toes and he’ll know." & "always sound uncertain with a certain certainty." brilliant job! |
all you need is oxygen chapter 1 . 4/24/2009 very powerful imagery. |
honey splattered brains chapter 1 . 4/2/2009 blah. i love this autobiography. it makes me want to go and write a fictional character that i will also wish on 11:11 because when i thought i found my REAL boy, it turned out he didnt have the one itty bitty thing that is the most important thing ever. single. BTW. he sounds hot. when you find him, i will root you on :D |
unheardmelodies chapter 1 . 3/29/2009 Amazing. Really... words fail me. Just want to say that this really made me wish for someone to think about. |
thefuturefreaksmeout chapter 1 . 3/1/2009 oh, wow. really amazing. |