Reviews for Stranger Things
Sinead chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
You uploaded this 4 and half years ago. Will you ever post the next chapter? Because this teaser is very intriguing. This story has a lot of potential.
heartofplatinum chapter 1 . 6/21/2009
This story seems amazing, you should contiue it!

Please update, that last time you updated was 2007 but now its 2009! PLEASE UPDATE!
Venus Smurf1 chapter 1 . 1/14/2009
Interesting beginning! Will you be updating this?
lanoirede chapter 1 . 12/25/2007
awe!

he's so on her still.

update soon! :)
d666lisa chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
ah you can't just leave it there PLEASE UPDATE brilliant story btw :-)
xonea chapter 1 . 7/2/2007
awesome start. can't wait to find out more.
LethargicLove chapter 1 . 6/17/2007
Is this going to be a story with a sad ending that will have me bawling my eyes out? I have a feeling that it is...
Lilly S. Robert chapter 1 . 6/6/2007
Hmm...i really like it so far..and is gracie dead or something?

hmm...now i really want to know, i cant wait for the next one
TV chapter 1 . 4/28/2007
it sounded like it could be quite interesting, though i do hope there'll be a happy ending, i'm not good with when things end badly. It nags in my mind for too long. But if they'd done this, or hadn't done that...

Anyways, i like the feel of your writing, good flow, good grammar (which isn't always the case on fictionpress i can tell you. And unfortunately i'm one of those people that notice and get itchy to correct it).

I hope you'll continue.
pinkfluffyoranges chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
pfft it doesn't look like chapter one was up the next day. This chapter is GREAT! why didn't you continue posting? it looks so promising. I'm going to add you to my author alerts and hope you decide to finnish this story that oozes potential.
tinymusicgirl chapter 1 . 2/17/2007
I want to know what happened I love stories like this!

Keep it up I'm hooked!
eliza-smiles chapter 1 . 2/9/2007
...intriguing...me thinks that it shall be an interesting read, cant wait to see where it goes...cheers
pleasebequiet chapter 1 . 2/6/2007
tommorow? its febuary 6th and you havet updated since! update!
Ian Bradley M chapter 1 . 1/16/2007
You have good sight of your characters, and the names are right. You may decide after reading Self Editing for Fiction Writers that you need to show these scenes and display a scene that opens up with such a conversation or shows Davis in public, as the thought of Gracie may be disturbing him at this point and makes him isolated from people. For now, it stands as exposition that reads as a synopsis would, which does let you understand the situation with your characters but doesn't yet read as a narrative. Instead of saying he pauses, you could say he knows all to well that they know nothing, but you need to display him with someone where this is happening (him looking them up and down, ready to leave, perhaps in a group setting). Good luck, you can write something great. I found what you have so far is in good order, it just doesn't show yet. You'll find the book for editing to be useful; I did.
akb-inactive chapter 1 . 1/16/2007
Definitely intriguing! Ohh, it's gotten me so interested, this review isn't going to be very long!

End.

:P I'll check up on the update!
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