Reviews for Stranger Things
Da Vinci at Work chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
Wow. This is certainly a wonderful way to begin a story. Can't wait to find out what happened between Gracie and Sterling! Update soon!
aprilsunshine chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
The first chapter was quite good. Short but it gave you a taste of hopefully what's to come. I can really tell the emotions and I'm actually really excited for chapter two. It all really draws me in.

My only criticism is that the continuations of sentences is a little confusing. Particularly "he remembers – clearer than before, more rational than before, older than before. He remembers and it doesn’t make it any easier" I understand the jist but a clearer sentences would definitely help in conveying a better story.

Anyways, much love, hope you update soon.
R. A. Faith chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
I'd sort of go with intriguing. This reminded me so much of A Walk To Remember. Of course, I hope you update soon, and great start.
tornangelwings chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
this is relly good, i have a feeling its going to make me cry and i NEVER cry so it must be, damn i hate non-good endings, wahahah
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