Reviews for Stranger Things |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. This is certainly a wonderful way to begin a story. Can't wait to find out what happened between Gracie and Sterling! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The first chapter was quite good. Short but it gave you a taste of hopefully what's to come. I can really tell the emotions and I'm actually really excited for chapter two. It all really draws me in. My only criticism is that the continuations of sentences is a little confusing. Particularly "he remembers – clearer than before, more rational than before, older than before. He remembers and it doesn’t make it any easier" I understand the jist but a clearer sentences would definitely help in conveying a better story. Anyways, much love, hope you update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd sort of go with intriguing. This reminded me so much of A Walk To Remember. Of course, I hope you update soon, and great start. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is relly good, i have a feeling its going to make me cry and i NEVER cry so it must be, damn i hate non-good endings, wahahah |