Reviews for Allison Wonderland
BelievesInUnicorns chapter 1 . 5/5/2014
Your story is amazing and it really touched my heart. I sincerely hope you become a published author because your stories are amazing!

I couldn't stop crying while reading this!
BelievesInUnicorns xx
Linq chapter 37 . 11/13/2013
Well even if it hasn't been published, I have to say that I loved this story and how heartbreaking it was. A beautiful mess!

So thanks for writing this and I hope you haven't given up on your dream of becoming a published author!
Leila chapter 37 . 11/9/2013
Holy shit. That was so fucked up, but so good.
so silver bright chapter 37 . 1/2/2013
I'm gonna PM you about how I thought about this story :) I have a ton to say!
tiltedHead chapter 27 . 12/9/2012
Good writing and good luck in your writing, this story should be told to the whole world.)
tiltedHead chapter 24 . 12/9/2012
Oh my god, this story is so touching and heartbreaking, i love it!
Guest chapter 37 . 8/5/2012
This is a wonderful book, and you are an amazing writer. I relly hope that you have further sucsess, I have little doubt that you wont, your determind and I can't wait to walk into a bookshop and see your name on the self.
chewingonpearls chapter 26 . 7/31/2012
This story was beautiful! Sad, but beautiful! I'm not the kind of girl that's into all that smoking, and cutting, and that type of music (though, I do enjoy a drink or two...or eight?), and that apathy towards life, but a lot of this really stuck with me and made me think. At first, I thought that type of lifestyle was kinda foolish, but now I see how it can be appealing to people, and I don't want to sound cliche or anything, but I've realized you don't choose that lifestyle, it kinda chooses you. This was really awesome! Your style is descriptive enough that I get the point, but not too wordy. The fact that I was able to empathize with most of the characters is awesome! The blur that became Allison's life was so striking and realistic to me. All in all, this was an amazing story! I loved every minute of it, and I think I've read it quicker than I have any story because it's just one of those stories that easy to read, and gets to the point. Marvelous, marvelous job, I honestly can't explain to you how much I enjoyed this!

You are truly talented!

-Sydney
moyans chapter 27 . 7/31/2012
this was a reallly reallly great story, it's really depressing though. Great job.
BTW : I LOVE MICHEAL 3
moyans chapter 22 . 7/31/2012
I SO SO SO SOOOOOOOO hope she leaves "verge" he knows whats best for her? you got her on drugs drinking liqour and having sex. Micheal is good for her. i hope shes gets with him :c
BrookeValerio chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
Re -reading... AGAIN3

Still love it a year later!

-B
MuffinsRoxSox chapter 26 . 11/26/2011
This story was absolutely amazing. I actually read this story a little while ago and forgot to review, so I just wanted to review and tell you that this is one of the most amazing stories I've ever read.
beesandlove chapter 26 . 11/18/2011
In my opinion, this story was incredibly poorly written. The grammar was awful, the characters two-dimensional and the plot nonsensical. As a sufferer of mental illness, I found the portrayal of such suffering quite ridiculous; people do not just wake up one day and decide to be bulimic just because their friend has told them to be. I was also offended by the fact that Allison was raped and then no more was said of it. Issues such as bulimia and sexual abuse were not touched on as they should have been, but were just added into the story and then forgotten about as no more than additions to fill up the slow-moving plot.

Something that really bothered me about this was that the author did not bother about minor details, such as legal complications. So this girl Allison was involved in a three-way murder and no one thought to investigate or sentence her with anything? I'm afraid the law does not work like that. In fact, the whole world does not work like that - as every single character was two-dimensional, obvious and predictable. In other words, the author should not give up her day job.
Among-the-Vampires chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
So I've read this story before. :) and I was thinking about it the other day, and i just had to log back on here so i could read it again. I really like this story. I just thought you should know it made a lasting impression with me. :)
lysstrange chapter 7 . 9/6/2011
I don't know how this story is going to end, but it is interesting.

I don't like the characters Jeremy and Zoey, though. They may be good at heart, but they are such bad influences on Allison. They know what they do is bad, yet they drag her into it. I hope in the end everyone sobers up and learns how to cope in healthy ways...haha

Good job.
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