|Reviews for Allison Wonderland|
| PyroTech chapter 29 . 6/11/2010
I don't know why I don't just read the others authors notes before reviewing...But that is exciting getting a call and all
| PyroTech chapter 28 . 6/11/2010
I will cross my fingers and wish you luck. This should really get out there in the world.
| PyroTech chapter 27 . 6/11/2010
Your story made me cry the first time I read it a few months back. I suggested it to one of my friends, since he got pretty tied up in the world of smoking and partying and self mutilation. It reminded me of him in so many ways, so I decided maybe if he read this, it would help him.
He came back to school the monday after I suggested it to him and gave me the biggest hug. He and I aren't ones for emotional moments and whatnot (they are rather uncomfortable) but I swear he was near tears when he thanked me for telling him about it.
I was reminded of this story a few days ago, because my older brother came home and asked my parents for some money to be admitted into rehab (he was bad into drugs and wanted to kill himself). So, I had a strong urge to read your story and decided to read it again. Once again, it made me cry. I really think that this should be published, I think it's good you are trying. It really reaches out to people, you know.
I absolutely enjoy stories like Allison Wonderland, and with you telling the audience what inspired you to write it, makes it all the more...real or touching...or whatever. I can't really find the word that I want at the moment. But I enjoyed it immensely. It reminds me of so many of my friends, and other kids at school. If they had somebody, at least one person who cared, then maybe things wouldn't be so bad for them after all.
| Capsaicin chapter 1 . 4/22/2010
I can not believe how unbelievably amazing this story is. I have a feeling that I'm going to be thinking about this long after I've closed this tab.
Definitely one of my favorite reads.
| midnight tales chapter 26 . 3/28/2010
i love how you end this.
| viv chapter 27 . 3/26/2010
this story was...wow. I've been looking for good stories on this site for a while now and then today I found this one and then I just couldn't do anything until I'd stopped reading it. I may not have been exactly like this in high school but I could definitly relate to a lot of things in this story. to be honest I almost stopped reading it after she got pregnant(of all things) but then I realized, hey, I stuck it out for the rape and the deaths, I can keep going. and I was so glad I did :) the ending was wonderful.
good job writing such a great story. I loved the voice and feeling behind it
| hurts chapter 37 . 3/18/2010
This is great. I don't know why I've never found this earlier. I am sure this could be your stepping stone to something way better, and you're definitely a good writer and you deserve the attention. Tell you what, too many girls out there are suffering from eating disorders, drug abuse and stuff, and can't lie but I am bulimic. Thank you so much for reaching out to us :)
| ambeereal chapter 31 . 3/4/2010
I absolutely loved Allison Wonderland. It made me cry. At first, I thought about not reading it because I thought it would turn out to be one of those over done emo stories, but it definitely wasn't and I'm sorry for ever thinking that! I know you finished this awhile ago, but I figured I would reply anyway. Good Luck on getting it published. It's definitely deserving of it. Teenagers everywhere would enjoy this story; I'm sure of it. Parents could probably get something out of it too. Good job! (:
| Nicole chapter 27 . 3/1/2010
This story is absolutely bloody fantastic. (: i loved every single bit of it.
| accro-au-fiction chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
This story was incredible
The end was perfect but in the same time so sad
Anyways , you are talented and I will try to read your other story
| morphine and lollipops chapter 37 . 2/9/2010
Wow. Just, wow.
Amazing. Unbearably amazing.
| XxxQueenLaurenxxX chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
heya i'm a newbie i really liked this chapter it's amazing i'd like to see more of this kind've work xx
Love and hugs xox
| Mysterywriter200 chapter 37 . 1/4/2010
I've followed Allison and Jeremy from the very begining. And no matter how many times I read it, I still cry. I love it!
| wayfaringstrangers chapter 37 . 12/21/2009
I absolutely loved this novel.
I was hooked from the beginning.
This is an amazing piece of work and
I hope it gets published some day.
| MissTragic chapter 26 . 12/7/2009
This story is so amazing. It's beautiful and raw and very well put together. I've read it countless times and it still almost brings me to tears every time..