Reviews for Allison Wonderland
endo.schism chapter 3 . 1/17/2007
Zoey... Jeremy... Kissing...

Bet that shocked a lot of readers. I can't believe that Allison likes Jeremy and he's been screwing his sister for God knows how long (and doesn't seem to be stopping for any feelings he might have for her).

Great twist, wish I thought of it first. P

Update soon!
Unique Child chapter 3 . 1/16/2007
This is a great story so far. I can't wait to read more. It kinda reminded me of when I first started hanging out with some of my friends. I really can't wait to read more.
endo.schism chapter 2 . 1/15/2007
Good work with this story, it looks like it's going in a good direction. ) I dig how your main character didn't know any of those things Jeremy talks about or how to smoke.

Update soon! P
FunnyFace240 chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
i really like it. very interesting perspective. i dont really understand whats going on at the bottom - but i like the way you adress the cliche.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
WELL this is definately a great start. Makes me want to read more. Yet the emptiness that she is going into seems more dead than the emptiness she is comming from. Oh well, I will just wait and see what happens next.
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