Reviews for Crack in the Wall
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 4/28/2007
Great rhyming and rhythm! This made me think of how people tell me to be myself, but how can I be that person if I don't know who that is? Anyway, excellent job.
rira-chan chapter 1 . 1/21/2007
very wonderful poem. great message

rira-chan
CrazyTurtles chapter 1 . 1/16/2007
I like it, lots of different meanins could be found. Really good job.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
Sometims it is so hard. Trying to be who you really are, but being afraid to show it. I struggle a lot with that. This is a beautiful poem, and I can tell you put work into it. Great job.