Reviews for your smile
bobby chapter 1 . 1/16/2007
i love it. you wrote something happy and if it means what i think it means then consieder it a hell yes if not then i will wait until it dose.
WyrdWolf chapter 1 . 1/16/2007
I almost thought this was a limerick, at first. Hm, I think this is your first, like, short poem. I like it, though I think the ending would have flowed better if you changed 'until' to 'till.'

Counting Petals chapter 1 . 1/16/2007
Short and to the point. Nicely done!
Herminia chapter 1 . 1/16/2007
Very sweet and short. I particularly liked the first line.