Now why on Earth are you afraid of me? I should be afraid of you! (Days here, from Gaia.) That was sad! I really liked it. Whose contest was it written for?

I love the imagery and the wording-everything flowed and was poetic. Keep it up! XD

Peace, love, goo,

RS (a.k.a. Days)

A very soft, sad story. You have a few grammatical errors- apostrophes, and a typo in the first line- but the story itself was perfect. I hope you do well in your contest!

-Mouse

Sometimes, I really don't like you.

:D

It's not fair! You're such an amazing writer. This is a great story! My only question/wonder is: was her sister older or younger? It could have gone either way in the story, and I don't remember there being a mention of that. Just wondering.

You used really good descriptions. I'd tell you everything that was good about it, but I'm getting kicked off the computer. So I'll just say: That was a very good/well written story!

*Ludo Lady