Reviews for Uncharmed |
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![]() ![]() ![]() They're such a cute couple but I don't have a very good mental picture of anyone. : [ I need better descriptions! Lol But other than that, this story rocks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha! I love that! "Yes, yes, I know. Terror of the night, evil that never dies, etc, etc..." LMAO! I love Ilana! She's funny. And I can't believe a vampire is afraid of Mascots. What a baby. Rofl. But he's still awesome, irrational fear or not. : D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fangs go in, Fangs go out, Fangs go in, Fangs go out. Hehe. Cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol what a jerk. Sounds hot though. I like it. : D |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! I LOVE THIS STORY. i read it in two days I cant wait too read decharmed. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've started reading it yesterday and "unfortunatelly" I am absolutely charmed by it. Character are lovely to work with. I'm off to continue reading. My respects to you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I must say, I absolutely love this story. I couldn't stop reading it. (Well technically I had to...it was too long to read in one bout. That aside, I really couldn't stop reading it.) Everything was well written. The characters were beleivable (as much as supernaturals can be)and the story flowed well. The only constructive critiscism I have for you is that the stroy ended a bit abruptly. Then again, I can't wait to read the sequel. |
![]() ![]() wow, great story. aprupt ending, but a realy good story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this story. It had good characters, good plot, and good interactions. There were slight problems, such as sometimes the chapters were almost nothing but one-line conversations, they seemingly went/watched a movie every other day, what happened to the other students getting out at late classes with Ella, and besides odd references to it, Alex didn't really seem a vampire until late on in the story, mainly because you've not followed the norm regarding Vampire lore. And if I didn't know there was a sequel, I'd say there's a lot left loose-why can't Alex read Ella, how come she's so charming, and what becomes of their relationship and her general life when involved/well known in so many abnormal, powerful circles. But yeah, over all, good story. Kudos. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really love this story- ur a great writer! but u have a lot of spelling mistakes. lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() I stumbled upon this story the other day and was hooked. You are a very talented writer with a wonderful imagination. This was a fantastic story. Anyhoo great job I am off to start reading "Decharmed" :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just read all of Uncharmed and I have to say, that was absolutely amazing, you really should get that published, it is utterly novel class material. Heh my favourite line in all of that had to be "Fangs go in, fangs go out, fangs go in, fangs go out" hehe that had me laughing for ages! Brilliant work, now i just have to start reading the sequel. |
![]() ![]() Amazing. I loved it to death. |
![]() ![]() Wait so their not her birth parents? I think that she's a farie |
![]() ![]() I love this story so far. |