|Reviews for Time Slinks By|
| Nemonus chapter 1 . 1/20/2007
I don't at all understand what this is about-a crush? a really vague "spiritual" metaphor? frustraion at "sticky" boredom in school?-but the imagery is good and pervasive. I'd like a period at the end. And maybe some elsewhere too, so the whole thing doesn't sound so much like a run-on.
| Exiled-Knight chapter 1 . 1/17/2007
"I like to think of her as my sweetly ever after/in lime green pants." For some reason these two lines gave me a great image and I love them, haha I don't know why though. I like this one too, a different perspective on school then most people write about, but i remember days when school seemed to exist like that. Great job :D
| Ronnie chapter 1 . 1/17/2007
Wow, A whole new perspective. I love it.