|Reviews for aries|
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/26
It's pretty good I guess, but you do need to work on your grammar and punctuation. The lowercase "i" had bothered me as I read this. But the poem is still good.
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/29/2007
sad... but it's beautiufl. I like it.
| MandyMisfit chapter 1 . 2/16/2007
This sounds more like a letter...it lacks rythem...but the concept i like.
| in a jar pk chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
THIS IS IT! this was EXACTLY what i was feeling when i wrote 'forgive me!'
'...you never expected that of me / well hun, neither did i.'
...we actually said those things to each other lol. i love this. brilliant. x