Reviews for I Don't
Amertie chapter 1 . 3/5/2008
It's nice how you wrote about something all of us experience.

"Failure sweeps up to accept me in its hard, cold yet utterly embracing arms."

I loved this description.

"I’m not stupid but the question he’s asking I don’t even remember learning."

I think this sentence would be more effective as: I'm not stupid, but I don't even remember learning the question he's asking.

I enjoyed reading it.
sharks don't sleep chapter 1 . 1/18/2007
Gah! Failure! I fail all the time... Nice job Shadow!

Falcon
InsomniMouse chapter 1 . 1/17/2007
A very nice piece. With very few words you manage to sum up a moment, and a feeling, perfectly. Kudos.

-Mouse