|Reviews for Black Dahlia|
| Nosside chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
It's a beautiful poems. Very descriptive and cryptic enough to glue you to the page.
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| Good Ol' Magic chapter 1 . 11/10/2007
Aha!From the moment I saw your name I knew you were a Sylvia Plath fan...It's beautiful }I favourited it so that I could read it whenever I need inspiration!
| Stella Grimshaw chapter 1 . 10/1/2007
I loved this one completely.
The bell jar should protect her
With its thorns of glass...
This (seemingly) innocuous armor
Is a condemnation,
And all is silence
Except for the deafening
Beat of her pulse screaming
I am I am I am.
Bloody Brilliant. I loved it.
| water lily nymph chapter 1 . 4/5/2007
i love the name 'black dahlia' - it sounds so mysterious. the bell jar theme throughout the poem is very creative, sor of like a 'genie in a bottle' effect. nice job. *
| invisibleandhopeless chapter 1 . 3/17/2007
I love it. I guess you could call Morbid Romanticism. It was lovely, and you are a very talented writer. I like the added things in parentheses. It adds personality. I don't think I'd change anything. It's quite brilliant really. Very Nice!
| Bonfire Of The Sanities chapter 1 . 2/10/2007
| bittersweet.season chapter 1 . 2/8/2007
i loved this. it was intruiging and i found myself reading it over an over. great.
| eldrin chapter 1 . 1/20/2007
"Beat of her pulse screaming
I am I am I am" is lovely, and this entire poem is a powerfully interesting image. The conclusion of a dahlia wilting is particularly striking. Excellent poem.
| Niels Stegeman chapter 1 . 1/20/2007
A very interesting and darkly beautiful piece. Strong imagery, well worded. Good work and thank you for the review!
| in a jar pk chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
i really enjoy the way you write. :)
and sylvia plath is one of my heroes lol. x
| CrazyTurtles chapter 1 . 1/18/2007
I really like this, its really good. Keep up the good work.
| ELKrawzfiar chapter 1 . 1/18/2007
The curses of indecision, missed opportunity, and raw self-awareness (not always a curse) are very well-illustrated in this piece. Interesting that you illustrate protection as a prison. Nice imagery in here. What I wonder (and perhaps what you want the reader to wonder) is what the light provides that Black Dahlia is so afraid of reaching out to claim.
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| keesa chapter 1 . 1/17/2007
this is an absolutely amazing piece. So beautifully written, I can most definitely relate to this piece. Many Kudos to you. Seriously, this isn't just a return review, I don't review unless the opinion comes from the heart. This poem touched me.
| fanficismything chapter 1 . 1/17/2007
That was really good! I like it!