Whoa, I wrote a poem like that recently. I don't think I'll be posting it on this site, but it's about talking to someone online and not liking it when they're gone. So i know the feeling.

I love this poem, I really know how that feels.

Another good poem. I wonder if there's a way that you can place your lines in parenthesis into italics. For me it would seem more integrated into your poem than out side. Also, I'm not sure if you need the word 'the' on your second line. It may be better on the third. Just a thought.

Thanks for posting.

This is good, its making your problems relatable to everyone by using instant-messaging as the bridge between worlds. It seems a little simple, but when I read it I felt the deepness and pain in the words. "(I wonder if your lips can)" makes the person seem heartless and robotic. Cruel in a good, descriptive way.