i like the thought and the easy rhyming in this.

"A current-ridden atmosphere,/Takes the stage." is really cool too.

respects, -ty.

This is beautiful. You've been able to maintain a steady tempo. I like this very much.

Beautiful. As always, love the content ad the rythm of this one.. Nothing negative to say botu this..so count your blessings. Heh. Keep writing!

-Moosher