Reviews for Love of a Brother
ramblingrobin chapter 22 . 8/29/2013
I enjoyed the story so much. I was sad I didn't see the epilogue.
Facella chapter 22 . 1/3/2013
Oh my god. I'm still so overwhelmed. This is story is so... horrible! It's so sad! If my roommate hadn't been here, I would have probably broken down, sobbing.
At the beginning I was a little skeptical, to be honest. I mean, come on, yet another petite, overly feminine boy that can't stop crying? And along comes the jock boy that decides to hate him. Wonderful.
But something made me continue reading. And I'm so glad I did! This story is amazing! It's so incredibly sad, so well written it made me feel like I was right there with them. And the thing that made this almost impossible for me to read is that stuff like that happens in RL as well. It's not just a fictional idea. Ugh, I feel like bawling all over again.
Anyways, I loved that you didn't just focus on Chase and Trevor. Audrey is a really interesting person and I'm glad he found Gus. It was a total shock to me when I found out that Audrey isn't simply a crossdressing/transsexual/transvestite/whatever man, but a hermaphrodite. Totally didn't see that one coming!
I hope you get around to actually writing an epilogue at some point. I would love to hear more about the Delaney boys. At first I thought Chase's brothers were just assholes as well. But you totally made me cry for Jason. Poor thing. I hope they find their own happy end!
Totally favourited this story. Hoping to read more from you!
Nique13 chapter 2 . 1/9/2012
"Brad! Stop it!" Chase stammered. Brad just grinned at the furious look on Brad's face.

Did you mean "...look on Trevor's face."?
kookoos chapter 22 . 2/9/2011
i kinda wanna see jacks story next

you should look into publishing this

hope the epilogue will be coming soon
kookoos chapter 2 . 2/1/2011
Chiroptarin chapter 22 . 8/21/2010
Oh I just read this today and I am SO itching for the epilouge!

XD I don't want to be a burden, but please hurry! I loved it so much.

forbiddentaboo chapter 21 . 7/12/2010
OMG...I'm so glad you updated, and really hope this story comes out with a happy ending, those boys deserve kindness after what happen to them. Thank you for not leaving completely.
PBG chapter 21 . 6/30/2010
Mep :o few and far between chapters but you keep the suspension well. :) Can't wait...and I'm a little confused. Did Trevor get shot?
Readragonira chapter 14 . 2/19/2010
I'm um to chap 14 and it sounds like a thriller. But I like the pairing you have. Very nice. I can feel with them. I'm am an emotional writer. Perhaps that is why I can connect to lots of maincharacters. Pls, kep writing and updating.

A fellow dreamer... XD
Sky's Angel chapter 20 . 12/2/2009
This is so wonderful! Very deep
UzumakiMatsurika chapter 20 . 11/17/2009

gurl i just love it the way you write cuz man it like keeps pur eyes glued to your stories

keep on write like foreals!
Penemuel chapter 20 . 11/16/2009
Wow. The Mother was quite unexpected.

I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter to see what happens.
MissFunnyMonkey chapter 20 . 11/10/2009
Good writing, but I hope that it gets happier. I'll keep reading but I don't want to cringe and cry anymore for the characters.

I glad Debra finally snapped and did something for her children. Why did it take her so long? Is it that one got away only to be dragged back? chapter 20 . 11/8/2009
...Lots of bad, sad, things in this chapter. I feel lousy for everyone...

I like Phil's justice, though. I think in this case it's more of the one who dealt it than the actual justice dealt. He wouldn't have expected anyone hurting him, least of all her, and I can just imagine the shock, horror, and amazement that she'd ever dare to lift a finger against him, much less a loaded bullet. The gun was loaded, right? Right?

I seriously hope so, because Phil is not a personality that I want in that storyverse. The road to recovery for the boys and Audrey will prossibly be a long one because of him.

(I... actually hope I get to see said road to recovery. I like angsty comfort and stuff. That's why I started reading this... :D)

P.S. I dunno if it was just me, but I think Phil was scarier when we had those first-person glimpses of his deranged self and didn't actually know what he had done. He just sounded really depraved, and smarter in his monologues.
forbiddentaboo chapter 20 . 11/6/2009
showing, showing, showing my love and faithfulness in reading your story. PLEASE Please, dont wait to long to update. This last wait nearly killed me.
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