hm.. nice(: but i liked "forever mine" more.. and somehow i get the feeling itto is betraying otori.. which is sad.. any chance of a random oneshot of otori's feelings from wherever he is? or maybe what happens when they all die and meet up again? (:

all i can say is that i love this chapter. such detail, such vision. brings a tear to my eye. *sniff*

youre...style of writing is so different. i was taken aback by what i was reading.

great, now im doing it. X3

the sex scene in this chappy was great. but a bit long winded. the flashbacks threw me off a bit.

thanks for the heads up. itll be helpful. X3

very beautiful love making. the style reminded me of anne rice :)