Reviews for white room
ChildeOfChaos chapter 1 . 1/28/2007
Wow, what an awesome poem! I love this, great message and awesome metaphor here. Great work!
i am valentine chapter 1 . 1/18/2007
interesting. preordained to die is an interesting concept, much appreciated by me, im glad to see something creative and deep. um yes. i enjoy your style : )
radioactive stanica chapter 1 . 1/18/2007
This is another "wow" for the day! I so happy to read this! I really love the way that you wrote this. Beautifully done!

I have to add it to my C2!

Best Wishes
ode to a firefly chapter 1 . 1/18/2007
This is a good piece, and I like the idea behind it, but it could be better if the lines weren't broken up and it was written as prose instead of poetry.
The System Mother chapter 1 . 1/18/2007
A gorgeous piece of art. :)

Much love,

THE MOTHER.