Reviews for A key
ItMustBeLove chapter 1 . 7/4/2007
I think the repetition is acceptable here, but normally it might bother me a little. I really like how the last lines seem to almost rhyme with each other, they flow so well together. This is very well written, I like it a lot :D
abandoned and forgotten chapter 1 . 4/15/2007
I think you repeat just a little too much, but somehow that repition is acceptable. It probably would have been better if you kept the first three lines of just one stanza and everything else after that, but it's not too bad the way it is, whether you are implying a death wish or not. I've written a couple of poems like that. You are to be commended, though.

Well done :)

Alya
EoSpHoRuS chapter 1 . 1/18/2007
Wow...I like how you did that poem, friend. Wow...I can't even explain it. Very well written. I'm jealous that you write such good poems!

~Meg
Doxology chapter 1 . 1/18/2007
I like it. It can mean so many things, and a lot of people can relate to it. You did a great job there. Also, I like the repeated lines, they show great feeling.

Peace and Love

~ Lifted
DontLookDown chapter 1 . 1/18/2007
It was interesting, Maybe a little less repitition, but anyways XD keep writing