Reviews for Campfire Tales
Zoius and the Devil chapter 2 . 1/22/2007
incase you didnt know, you dont allow anonymous reviews. you might get more if you do.

anyways...so. second chapter. i dont think it was too slow at all. i mean, we got to meet Tommy. anyways, what about Harris being gay? did you already say that? i often miss stuff, so maybe you did. ah well.

Harris urged himself to say something witty, hating himself more when all he said was, “okay.”

that's the only mistake i caught. should okay be capitalized?

~kon
Zoius and the Devil chapter 1 . 1/18/2007
good start. continue, i want to see what happens.

“Skyscrapers do not a city make.”

that's all i could find. hope it helps.

update soon!

~kon
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