i thought they were gonna get togathter it so sad at the end...

That was so beautiful and sad. But very well-written.

This was really, really good, and tells the story of so many people. We don't always get the chance to find our happily ever after. Absolutely beautiful.

So sad. Is it authobiographic?

hey, this is pretty good. A similar thing happened to me a few years back...

Keep on writing!

suzie

Aw, sweet. a little tragic. cute though. I like it!

I like your writing especially much in this story. You're both showing and telling, and writing like in an actual novel- doing it better than some published authors, too! (Not that that's truly a compliment, once you've read some of the crap that's out there...)

So I guess my big issue with this story is how it ends the way it does. I guess that the end itself is necessary, but this seems like a stretch. Why on earth would they lock only one stall, and a middle stall at that? It would make more sense if they just washed off the messages- anything but randomly deciding to lock one stall!

-Yna, from the Review Marathon (see the link in my profile!)

I really liked this. Strong and realistic.

There's a bathroom stall where I go to college that's like that. My favorite line: "I'm in love with her and I don't care who knows it."

Hey, we should communicate with each other any way we can, right?

Great story.

oh man. That was sad. :(

The ending was great though. I'd love to see what happened between the two of them, but this story just doesn't seem to support an extention.

Good job.

good stuff!

that was cool.

That was REALLY good. *bows to you*

That was crazy. You should have extended this.

This story feels so real, and it's very well written. Even after it was over I yearned to read more. -