Reviews for Move Along
Lauren chapter 1 . 1/20/2007
Hey Alex! It's Lauren! I LOVE your story so far! Keep more coming!
Mayleena chapter 4 . 1/20/2007
That's SSO sweet! I like the idea of putting that line thing to separate them, i don't have to back track now.

Update as soon as possible, i want to know more!
Mayleena chapter 3 . 1/20/2007
Aww...i love it! its so mysterious and sweet. Keep it up!

One thing i would like to point out, you switch over from I's to Me's to Her's (same with David) and sometimes i have to back track to get it right. . . .Other wise its very good!

Update please!
silent-hallucination chapter 3 . 1/19/2007
LOVE LOVE LOVE THE SUSPENCE! no cemments. just please update.
Mayleena chapter 2 . 1/19/2007
Awwh. . . ! I love it! Sorry i didn't right more last time (was that you?) but i needed to get off asap! so i'll write more this time!

Its so cute and mature and the way you describe things is very vivid and i like it. I wish i had someone like that to make me feel wonderful, - sigh - oh well. . .

Update soon please!
crayola11 chapter 2 . 1/19/2007
OMG! I love it so far! Please update soon! What happens with Lacey? Ahh! I love it!

A reviewer chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
Mayleena chapter 1 . 1/18/2007
Cute. Update very soon!
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