|Reviews for UnSweet Sixteen|
| Undrahas chapter 1 . 7/2/2007
love the detail about the flickering moonlight. it was cool.
| bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 1/20/2007
Beautifully written. I love the powerful imagry here, it seems almost tangible. And the way the last line in itallics ends the poem is great. Amazing work and keep writing.
| The System Mother chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
A very powerful piece!
I love... so... strong. :)
| Sargent Pepper chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
I really didn't understand this. Could you explain it a little better. Joey