Reviews for UnSweet Sixteen
Undrahas chapter 1 . 7/2/2007
love the detail about the flickering moonlight. it was cool.
bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 1/20/2007
Beautifully written. I love the powerful imagry here, it seems almost tangible. And the way the last line in itallics ends the poem is great. Amazing work and keep writing.

:)

Michelle
The System Mother chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
A very powerful piece!

I love... so... strong. :)

MUCH love,

THE MOTHER.
Sargent Pepper chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
I really didn't understand this. Could you explain it a little better. Joey