Reviews for UnSweet Sixteen
Undrahas chapter 1 . 7/2/2007
love the detail about the flickering moonlight. it was cool.
bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 1/20/2007
Beautifully written. I love the powerful imagry here, it seems almost tangible. And the way the last line in itallics ends the poem is great. Amazing work and keep writing.


The System Mother chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
A very powerful piece!

I love... so... strong. :)

MUCH love,

Sargent Pepper chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
I really didn't understand this. Could you explain it a little better. Joey