Reviews for Deep Green: Descendance |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I loved your story and would love to turn it into a comic! Let’s bring it to life together. Discord: amabeck Best, Ama! |
![]() ![]() ![]() D'aw :3 nice story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, have you read the green rider series by chance? If not you should, something like your story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() sorren is sweeter and sweeter every chapter-that bullhead cat, she has no idea at all (understatement of the century) |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw, so much for the prinnce being the one that showed up but that's fine, i think it's him this time *fingers crossed* :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() damned sorren can't stay away from her for too long isn't he a teady bear? *chuckles* |
![]() ![]() ![]() whoa, it takes balls to talk to the future king like that go cat! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i find this story unusual and new to me because i never read one that has the main character thinking of his 6-yr-old crush half of the time while the female character is thinking of passing a test i like the prince, adorable |
![]() ![]() ![]() yo! i knew what was going to happen the moment she said one day she ran away... i like it that they met before hmm, competition (that keighto dude)...nice, i hope there are fights coming up |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like this story already you have a nicely-flowing writing style, the narrator's voice is real enough, and the names and history is well-explained and clear great job :p i like the new prospect to this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it. Oh, I absolutely loved it, and I really liked that they got together. A few times there were a few line-break problems, but other than that, it was really, really good, and I couldn't really find any typos. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really good...i wonder why no one else reviewed... |
![]() ![]() ![]() You are teh BEST! i ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY! Its been so long since i've actually found something that i enjoyed and kept me in front of the computer. I enjoyed this so much! You have no idea what an amazing writer you are! I hope you continue writing, you have talent and imgaination, something a lot of us only dream about. Once again, GREAT, AMAZING, SUPERB, job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() im sad. this had better end well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! I hope . . . |