Reviews for You Told Me
puppymobile chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
Oh! So sad! Why'd they leave?

A beautiful poem.
cassandra12271 chapter 1 . 1/21/2007
How sad! But tha's the way life is. Just like the song The Water is Wide.
123454321 chapter 1 . 1/21/2007
Very blunt. I think it makes the point of the poem that much more blatant. Nice job.

-J.A.
notated descant chapter 1 . 1/20/2007
This paints a very dramatic picture in my mind... I always have these sort of scenes in my head for short stories, but it was always hard for me to express them in a poem. This was pretty well done though, I have to say.

Keep on writing! (and thanks for the review!)