Reviews for Fine Line
Leminay chapter 61 . 2/10/2013
This is a great ending to a great story. From beginning to end, I had hoped for Keiran and Caomhe's love to finally be realized. Although they were young, I thought that the development of their relationship was extremely realistic. Middle school kids do indeed focus a lot of their attention on love. All of your characters are amazing, and I really did want the gang to conquer the world. It makes me sad that there won't be anymore chapters, but I have enjoyed the ride :')
Bubbly Girl chapter 61 . 5/22/2012
I love this story so freaking much! :) I really loved how early on you started so I was able to see how it all began and then how it played out into their lives! Brilliant! It did seem a tad rushed at the end but I really enjoyed all of the flashing forward into little bits and pieces of each couple's future. I totally knew that Leah was going to end up with Evander! :) I just had this feeling... :) And I absolutely adore Fiona and Benny! They are just too cute! And Evie with Keiran! So sweet! Anyways, I just wanted to let you know how much I loved your story! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

Bubbly Girl
TheGirlYouOnceKnew chapter 61 . 11/26/2011
Oh my goodness. Your story has influenced my life quite a lot. Now, I sing the window song whenever I get the chance. (And I read your story last year! Just never reviewed it) I even made a plan with my friends to take over the world. ( It's very legit.) Also, I made a pact with my friends. (It's hanging in my wall.) Your story is amazing and the storyline was perfect. Thank you for writing something like this. :)
Eternal Night the First chapter 60 . 12/6/2010
I think this has to be the most amazing story i've ever read. It has everything from romance to comedy to drama. The last few chapters touched me so much. I really wanna thank you for writing such an amazing story.
lovefantasyworkreality chapter 18 . 3/27/2010
I can relate to Fiona in reading Garrett's story... I'm reviewing notes for an anatomy class, and there are so many misplaced apostrophes!
addicted chapter 63 . 3/2/2010
so i read this whoel story in the last 3 days and i loved it...i liked how it started from SO YOUNG that i felt like i was growing up with them and al that cliche was AMAZING this story...i wish you could make a sequel like maybe a story about their kids and all its like a LONG epilogue but like also states like the missing parts including their college years and all that...but all in all AMAZING STORY!
Merest chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
Great chapter!
SarcasmIsPoetry chapter 8 . 1/1/2010
Wait, wait. Can I ask what are the ages of the characters? 'Coz here, Keiran said he's 12?
CaveDwellers chapter 63 . 12/26/2009
Ah, Keiran. He does make me laugh.

Actually, I was laughing throughout this whole scene. It's so nice when they're together, and not fighting and all that jazz.

I also laughed some more at the irony (purposeful, I'm sure) of Caomhe's statement.

Congratulations on the book, and Merry Christmas at that! I'm broke at the moment, but I want a physical copy of Fine Line. Totally gonna buy it after I get paid on Sunday. :D

'Til next,

CD 1.0
mixed signals chapter 61 . 12/11/2009
This story is awesome :D

I'm hooked, despite its length. And I took around 4 hours to finish reading this :D Stayed up late. It's almost 3am now HAHA :)

I love Caomhe and Keiran especially ;) So glad Caomhe finally admitted her love for Keiran at the end! :)

A great piece of work. Thanks for writing this :DD

A. Watts chapter 61 . 10/21/2009
This is a really great and sweet story! I'm glad that I clicked on it and read it! I love it!
lovefantasyworkreality chapter 62 . 10/17/2009
Personally, I liked the first one, where you split it into three parts.

Incidentally, I'm taking on NaNoWriMo this year.
CaveDwellers chapter 62 . 10/17/2009
When I saw this on the email I was like o.O what? Now I understand.

I personally think that the pastness/futureness should be cut, so as to have the whole story as it was meant to be read. If you really think about it, it's redundant. It works for FP, to keep people hooked and such, but I don't know if it would do the same in an actual, official book.

However, I think you should split it anyway, just for size/expense purposes.

Those are my opinions, anyway. I'll totally buy, whenever you come out with it. By the way, is WWID out yet?

'Til next,

CD 1.0
o0felixfelicis0o chapter 62 . 10/17/2009
dude, I love that you used my suggestion for the title "At the Swing Sets", soo sick. Anyways, I think you should go for splitting it in two sections, and the first end with the pact. I know it would make the second book really long, but I;m up for that. And I seriously think I'm going to buy this book when it's available. So keep us updated.
nolongrnwatwasapparentlydenial chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
reminds me of me and brad... the kid literally stalks me, i swear. he hasn't attempted to hug me since last year, because of a certain incident involving my fist and his face, resulting in a black eye and a bloody nose in just one hit... thats what he gets for pissing off a strong girl...
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