Reviews for Moonlight Sonata |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I remember reading this years ago and it's a shame you stopped updating this. I really liked this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLs write more! plz plz plz i beg u! dis is too kul to wait for! uya noe u hav a way of grabbin ppls attension.. dats bcuz dis story is so interesting i've honestly neva read a story lik dis 1 b4... i've read vamp stories bt nt 1's dat hav sumfin to do wif a library basement n... n 1 dat has sumfin happenin wif her BFF's slutty fwend! wait did dat mak sence?... nwayz who cares dis book is amazin ya gotter write more! |
![]() ![]() I found this chapter so...Secretive. It's kind of funny that Margalo still doesn't know. When are you going to finally pull out the truth that Julien and his family are all vampires? Heheh. |
![]() ![]() Hm, I don't think that you're making things go too fast. xD Julien...He seems too reluctant. Plus, you haven't really delved into his thoughts or anything like that too much so there's no real way to tell what he's thinking, you know? But Margalo, jeez. She's head over heels for him, so to speak. Fantastic chapter Emily. |
![]() ![]() I hate to bring up the past, but in a way...Bella reminds me of Kelsii... Like, how she tried to completely destroy Arisa and Margalo's friendship. You of course, being Margalo and me...Being Arisa. o_o; Hah.. Yeah. . Though, I don't really act like her. xD For some reason I really did like this chapter. You're really good with describing things. . |
![]() ![]() Mm...This chapter, was alright... It's going a little.. Hm, I don't know. x.x; Though Antione, Julien, and the ginger boy (xD) are vampires, you really think their eyes should all look the same? o.o; And Margalo... I understand that if you stare into a vampire's eyes you become...Entranced, but, she didn't stare into them for too long, now did she? o.o I don't know. . |
![]() ![]() In this chapter, I noticed a bit of repitition of the last. Nothing big though. But when she runs into people (Yes, a silly thing to notice), it always says, "and smacked right into someone else." xD;; But erm, that's all. Nice chapter. |
![]() ![]() Blast it. Cliff-hanger. D I'm glad you have the next chapters up. xD! Hah, this chapter though...Hm, I say it was even better than the last. |
![]() ![]() Emily, this first chapter is fantastic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chap! JulienxMargalo? Update Soon! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, Margalo still doesn't know exactly what Julien is (even though the reader knows from the summary). Haha, Julien said he was THIRSTY. Good clue there. So, I hope school isn't too hard on you and that you'll be able to update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another well-written chapter. Please don't stop! I want to read more between the two of the... soon, I hope! I'm loving your story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't wait! |
![]() ![]() ![]() How wonderful! Julien seems to keep getting more and more interesting! ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, was that last comment an indicator? Is he a vamp? was that what was meant by the 'don't make her one of us' comment? |