|Reviews for Through the Thrift Store Window|
| A.E. Waldo chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
I'll start by saying that I love the idea. There's something about thrift stores that give a creepy vibe - creepy but colorful.
I see that this story is complete, but I would love to see you expand on some things. You have such an imaginative start here, I can see this easily evolving to something wonderous - while still staying short.
Advice I have would be to show and not tell. Instead of telling us what the girl experienced, make us experience it too.
| Sir Scott chapter 1 . 1/20/2007
Perhaps dreams are an extension of reality. I liked this story it was well written with a nice charm to it.