this is crazy fabulous. Just perfect.

Sadly, I have to say that I *did* have plans on buying a copy.

Until I found it on the Kindle app and the page count. 54 pages, to start, are not enough for the requested price. I would happily pay $0.99, but I expect at least 100 pages for higher prices—it's a bonus that at least it wasn't above $2.99; I've seen people try to sell under 100 pages for over $5.

The second thing that has me wairy is one of the reviews, and my own judgement—as a writer, and a rather thorough one... I spend a lot of time developing and fleshing out my ideas—of how much writing there should be compared your spoiler summary. The summary suggests a relatively long adventure, flushed out enough that the reader will be satisfied by the end—or begging for more.

As far as that review goes, it claimes that the story starts out good and Urban Fantasy, but then goes weird when it shifts to Fairy Tale. They could be saying that they did not like the shifting, which I would think should kind of be expected, what with the Kindle summary, or the way it shifted. Dunno.

In my case, I would love to read something that is neither rushed nor containing spontaneous elements.

If you ever get out a second edition, either online or Kindle, I very much look forward to reading it.

That was cruel. I was really getting into the story and then it suddenly stopped. Huh.

I jut bought this on kindle! Woo! :D idk why I'm telling you, I'm just excited :)

I really like this story :) it's sweet, and pretty original.

Um..I don't have a kindle...? Is it available in another format or something so I'd be able to read it?

You ever going to do a spin-off with Gareth?

ah i wondered why it all was so short i like the extras though fall seems to hate me... as well as a few other chapters... ah well the whole website hates me today... . i'll be looking into a kindle i'm sure my parents will consider it since i love to read and buying all the books hard copies would cost alot xD

Aww I hadn't read this story before! So I'm glad I did now :) And I had read Andy/Nick's story a while back, so didn't quite make the connection..

Anywho, the main story was very cute and I enjoyed the additional bonus stories too because they added just that bit more to the 'what happens next' part. I wouldn't mind a few more! Something with more about Gareth perhaps? Or years in between?

I might look at buying the ebook too. Is it going to be any different? I think that for about 2 quid, it's good value though and a great idea!

'dudette

This was so cute! I loved the extra Snow chapters, You did a great job!

This was a fun tale. I liked how you mixed the children's stories with contemporary life. I also liked Jack's innocence throughout. Thanks.

Yes I noticed the crossover and lots of love for the rest of it. I agree with you with loving this story the most, it was magical... sorry for the pun :D

That was a really sweet story. I read it some time ago, but thought I'd let you know. I think the first 2 chapters are the sweetest. Though I expected a little more, um... power or resistance from the Snow-queen,but its still all very sweet. Please keep writing!:)

I LOVED IT!

Jack was just too adorable! With the flowers and the photo albums and the licking the frosting! And this was such a cute story! I loved everything!

Nice work!

Hehe I finally got the cross over in Crossplay. Although to be honest I thought those names looked familiar-until I actually went back and looked at that other story again. Clever. CAn't wait to see what happens next.

I have to say this story was great. I just loved what you did with all the Christmas legends/Tales in this story.