This is so beautiful , the slow opening up of why she is the way she is, her past, her secrets, just laying out there in front of her ex without judgement and hurt. So poignantly expressed. Although I think her ex didn't deserve to be cheated like that, when she slept with someone else. It all feels like a dream actually

It's very bittersweet. I love it.

He is such an understanding boyfriend!:D I love him! Love the oneshot.:DD

Hey. I really enjoyed reading your story. It was different from what I expected, but as a whole, it was true to the bone. It felt real and raw - kind of like what people are made of. And I love Markus cause he's just so understanding. Great job. LOVED IT.

Beautiful. Yeah, I know that sounds cheesy, but it was very well-written and you solved and clarified and wrote out the plot-line which was very creative well. I loved reading it and seeing it end on a high-note. That girl truly needs an understanding guy as Markus and it's adorbale to see he loves her unconditionally and can't stop.

Missy, though i am completely sorry for saturday i'm glad that you wrote this instead.

I'm quite fond of this one.

Except i think you need to finish these shindigs before you keep on adding people.

Because knowing you dear you'll just leave me hanging once again.

But anyways, amazing job lovely.

Toodles

I like this little group you've got going. You have created this little trio of one-shots that fits together so well. The first, Right Round, is silly and just lovely. The second, Totally and Completely Upside Down, is serious but naive in character action with the potential for more. The third, Island of Existence, is grown up in mentality and very heavy.

They all fit together so well, these girls strung together by these three boys Nathan, Dan, and Markus. I would really love to see you write more especially with your second story Totally and Completely Upside Down, but I will take anything. You're very talented, thanks for the update.

i love your oneshots, simple as that.