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ce n'est pas que je m'appelle chapter 1 . 4/2/2007
This describes what Im going through right now with my friend perfectly. Amazing Job!
in a jar pk chapter 1 . 1/22/2007
such a real, awful feeling. i love the way you captured it here. as always lol.

sorry i never have anything constructive to say. XD

xxD
slinkytool34629 chapter 1 . 1/21/2007
Great poem. It really touches on what everyone feels like when they're in love with someone who doesn't reciprocate the feeling. Just as a side note- be careful not to use the bold and italicized words too much or else it's not as effective. It worked well in this poem, but for some it won't. Continue the great work!