|Reviews for Virtuoso|
| t-t-t-ouch chapter 1 . 7/15/2007
Very beautiful, very sad, and very classical.
I love the music references, too.
| mmmmmmmm chapter 1 . 2/9/2007
your writing seems to be full of classical references, which is really unique. and i hope you keep it. because just between you and me, once you start getting influenced by other poets, your originality is hard to hold onto.
a few typos i caught- "Cara, you’re eyes" you're - your
"It seems can never" - It seems I can never
the first stanza is nice. it's hard to say why. i guess every once in a while it's nice to have a good, straightforward, honest-feeling description of things, especially things like music, which i love. and i loved the subtle rhyme in the third stanza- it felt almost unintentional.
fave line- "I would be Botticelli for you/if only I could paint. But all of me/is all I have."