Reviews for The Infinite Descent
Mosaic Stains chapter 1 . 2/19/2007
A boat sailing on the night sands as the waves cascade, is what his made me think of. I like the "Descent, picking the darkest flowers upon the way."
emeraude-irlandais chapter 1 . 1/30/2007
Jeez, I leave for a week and come home to 50 poems! Decided to start with yours- they're always so lovely. :) I adore "picking the darkest/flowers", as if negativity or mystery would grow on cliffs, heavy blossoms drooping... just gorgeous. ~bella~
felicia13 chapter 1 . 1/22/2007
I rather like the darker tinge that your joria have taken. It's quite refreshing and a bit ... lemon-ish. Like a sour aftertaste. Quite refreshing.

"picking the darkest flowers upon the way" I dream of orchids soaked in blood and lilies made of midnight shadows.


eldrin chapter 1 . 1/22/2007
Dark and interesting. "Imprecation" sounds wonderful and strangely gloomy here.