Reviews for With You in Mind
SpeedingCars8 chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
this poem actually depressed me. it reminds me of a situation i was caught up in. well i still am. just the ex boyfriend stabbing me in the back, making me believe him and then doing something to hurt me again, as usual

i think the poem could have done without "our hearts descend", my opinion is that it interrupts the flow of the poem. it's hard to avoid that in a poem that is so short and to the point like this one.

the last two lines are sad but very true.

great writing.
Travis C. Eckert chapter 1 . 1/27/2007
A nice poem. Thinking of what will happen. Makes plenty of sense.