|Reviews for Pip and Lautréamont and All|
| eldrin chapter 1 . 1/23/2007
I love the repetition! Using parts of each stanza in the next creates a beautiful fluidity/continuence that is entrancingly compelling. "The disarmed artist/And the umbrella/transcendent" is lovely. You use some wonderful phrasework here. I'm going to have to read more of your work. Good poem.