Reviews for Perfect
DarkBlysse chapter 1 . 4/10/2007
I can relate and trust me, some 'perfectionists' suffer for a lifetime. I loved the second half of this-it really struck me and made me think of myself.
Sir Scott chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
I know some people who are like that. Good job.

eldrin chapter 1 . 1/23/2007
Quite a lovely poem...intense and nearly heartbreaking. We feel for the perfectionist even if we aren't her, and more if we are. "Staining her lovely white sheet/With a melancholy tinge/Of pain and transgression" is beautiful-tragic imagery.

This is really good, and I'm sorry now that I let the first poem I read keep me so long from returning to your work. I'll certainly be back to read more.
All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 1/23/2007
Another excellent piece of work like usual. Can't relate though, not a perfectionist myself. But I do understand the wanted to reach goal sort of idea. Anyways, -stops ranting- good job.

Another your question about sin, I didn't really think about it that much. Hm.

As always, thanks for the reviews!

a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 1/23/2007
wow, I know what that's like (I'm a real perfectionist). well done:)