Reviews for Guilty Pleasure
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 1/25/2007
Nice piece. I like the feeling of a well-poised girl, perhaps a debutante of sorts, at this party, and suddenly losing her nerve because of this person. I think what gives me that image is the phrasing - "fit of nerves," "fret away the seconds." That sounds very old-fashioned, Victorian in nature. I don't know. That's just me at 2 AM. Nice. Keep writing! :)