Reviews for Dawn
MKtheMentalOne chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
Wow. I don't know what to say. I'm speechless.

Your imagery is incredible! And your rhyming completely tops mine. And it flows perfectly. It kind of reminds me of a Dr. Seuss book. (I hope that's not offensive, because I liked him a lot when I was younger)

I shall have to read more of your writing.