Reviews for You say coincidence, I say bad luck
cerasylvania chapter 9 . 7/19/2008
loved it hope to read more. especailly like jays character.
sleepies chapter 9 . 7/4/2008
aww...tats sad. she left him to deal with the mess even tho she was kinda at fault. y won't she trust him? ( looking forward to the updates -
macey chapter 9 . 7/4/2008
u should update
Regin chapter 8 . 7/3/2008
I Like, I Lust, I Love!Please Update Soon!
CrossMyHeart chapter 9 . 6/23/2008
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!

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PLEASE!

Obnoxious aren't i?

XxCrossMyHeartxX
SkateForLife chapter 9 . 4/22/2008
Oh yay! I like this story a lot so far...can't wait for more interaction between Jay and Lydia!
chinaberry chapter 9 . 3/21/2008
ah

i love this story so much! and i love jay.s character

PLEASE UPDATE!
Ayra Amer chapter 9 . 3/14/2008
this is a great and interesting story around every turn theres something crazy going on. UPDATE SOON!
kirarin242 chapter 3 . 3/14/2008
wow he got her there lol he went to the police before her that is stupid for them to belive that tho lol
kirarin242 chapter 2 . 3/13/2008
really good :)!
kirarin242 chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
Lol that's fucking funny dude! i love it :3! XD!
chocolatechipash chapter 9 . 2/17/2008
i love itt! i just wish there would be more action between lyd and jay anyway is there going to be a school scene or ..? coz it would be great if there was another guy D anyway update soon.. hopefully your not too busy.
readingismything chapter 9 . 2/13/2008
hey...the plot of this story is pretty nice and i can see it becoming more interesting...i wonder has Jay been really robbing or not?...hope u will update soon!
Blank89901 chapter 9 . 1/22/2008
I love Jay! He sounds so cute! I wish a guy like him would come and rob me!
Hydie chapter 9 . 12/31/2007
what an incredibly corny chapter...sorry, couldn't help myself. And, I actually believe Jay.
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