Reviews for You say coincidence, I say bad luck |
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J.S. Goldberg chapter 9 . 10/7/2007 DUN DUN DUN! Sorry I haven't reviewed the past couple chapters. Or...so I think. I can't remember if I did or not. Um, I sense some foreshadowing going on. She said that people can overcome hate...so I think that foreshadows her overcoming her hate towards Jay. Just a thought of mine. This was an interesting chapter. And I find myself starting to believe Jay. I don't know why. I have this nagging feeling that he's telling truth. I'll just have to see...Haha. Awesome chapter! I can't wait for the next one! |
Endowment's Seraph chapter 9 . 10/7/2007 this was good. can't wait to read more. ~mel |
Friggin-Crazy chapter 9 . 10/7/2007 I love your story, its so great. The thing between Lydia and Jay is driving me carzy though! Poor Jay... Canned corn is heavy! |
FM Radio chapter 9 . 10/7/2007 That was so bizarre that it was AWESOME! :) Update soon! |
Essevera chapter 9 . 10/7/2007 keep up the updates |
SummerBaby94 chapter 9 . 10/7/2007 yep, hate can be overcome... so lydia will most likely fall in love with jay... and they'll find the loser who's robbing everybody's houses. |
Katie Valentine chapter 9 . 10/7/2007 ah shesh. i wonder what will happen next! is jay really innocent? somehow i get the feeling he kinda is. lol. whatever it is, he sounds hot. gah. lol. write more soon soon soon! you rock! XD |
starlit x sky chapter 9 . 10/7/2007 I LOVE this story! It's so well written and it's got a really good plot. Update soon please! |
starlit x sky chapter 8 . 10/7/2007 I liked Lydia and Jay's reactions when they first met each other in the house. Is 'met' the right word? Anyhoo, another great chapter |
starlit x sky chapter 7 . 10/7/2007 Jay didn't do it, right? Good chapter. |
starlit x sky chapter 6 . 10/7/2007 Aww Jay comforted her. It really sucks that Kat's been robbed. |
starlit x sky chapter 5 . 10/7/2007 Oh she's dared to kiss Jay! Aw her mum won't be home for Christmas! That sucks. |
starlit x sky chapter 4 . 10/7/2007 Oh, why was she protecting Jay? |
starlit x sky chapter 3 . 10/7/2007 Oh, this is really good! I love this so far! |
LethargicLove chapter 9 . 10/7/2007 Okay, so what Jay said in this chapter totally confused me. Did he mean it in the way that he wasn't the one behind both robberies (which I can totally believe) or that he wasn't a thief by profession at all? Ahh, I think I may be overanalyzing things. Anyway, I like the sister bonding in this chapter; it was really cute, especially when Les told Lyd that she was just as pretty as she. Can't wait for the next chapter! |