Great chapter! I especially loved the ending!

That was short. And who really broke into Lyd's frend's house...the world will never know...DUNDUNDUN. UPDATE SOON! :P

great update. yeah i think their reactions were pretty much right. update soon!

Another great chapter! Loved the way these two interact, and I can't wait for more! This really is a fantastic story.

Hey Agent Raindrop! Great 8th chapter! Lol, Lydia should know those bobby-pin things only work in movies haha, but not in real life. I tried opening my locked bathroom door once, didn’t work haha. It was obvious that Jacob will catch her and she would start to question him. It’s going to take a lot of persuading more her to believe him. Anyways, till your next chapter! XD [11:35pm in ON, Canada]

WOW! I love this story! It's so funny and really cute! I thought that last part was just fine... The part with her mom seemed a little too over the top but all in all it's a great story!

I wonder if Jay did tell the truth, and if he did, I wonder who did it. Please update soon?

Eh,its ok. We all got lives other than here. With the exception of me .I'm kidding. But awesome chapter. I like it a lot. I don't think you need to re-write it. I was so happy to see that you updated because this story is so awesome. I can't wait for the next chapter...even if it takes a while to update.

...interesting story

Who is the girl in the picture? Maybe Jay used to be a girl! Anyway, I like this story so far! Keep up the great work!

lol so did he actually do it? or is he lying! crapp. i hope he didn't. man i wonder what lydia is going to do to find evidence! ah! please update as soon as possible. it sucks that you have so many assignments and million tests coming up. thank god you updated though. so therefore this proves you ROCK! :]

Thanks for updating

I loved it...she had to get caught didn't she :P

I dunno about reactions...wouldn't Jay...you know...be a bit angrier? I know I would...but...I have no idea...they're your characters- your imagenary friends :D I don't know Jay like you do :) I'm sure you'd know if your making your "friends" do thinks they don't wanna do

haha. this is cute. a nice easy read. i like it. can't wait to read more

~mel

whos in the picture? his sister?

maybe she passed away? m.

i love the story, whens the next update? lol

i hope lydia and jay end up together! :)

haha. OMG. XD