Reviews for You say coincidence, I say bad luck
Raised with Fangs chapter 16 . 11/28/2010
hm i woder why everyone seems so suspicious of him...
strangledice chapter 16 . 11/28/2010
It's nice that Lydia and Jay are getting along very well. I love Lydia and Leslie, they're like the cutest siblings ever. I mean they care and help each other when they're in need.

Well, I have a question. In the early chapters, there's no scene that Lydia gave his name to Jay. So, how did he know her name's Lydia?
strangledice chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
This story is amazing. By the way, I'm a new reader. I wonder how would they meet again.
MagicMouse chapter 16 . 11/28/2010
AWESOME STORY! :o

(I'm one of your new readers, by the way :D)

I'm getting this bad feeling... . They got close all of a sudden... I hope Jay's not using her D: *gasp* Maybe I'm just over-analyzing things :P

Anyway, I'm looking forward to your next update! :D
sarrbear8 chapter 16 . 11/28/2010
I absolutely adore this story!
violet-eyez chapter 16 . 11/28/2010
so is he really the thief?
gulistala chapter 15 . 7/30/2010
I think it's Melissa and that Dominic might be in on it, too. A past in shoplifting? Hm.

Also, I don't think the girls should have to put up with their father's douchebaggery. The reactions of the girls aren't too credible. I would've thought the emotions would've been more pronounced and dramatic, especially on Lydia's part. And I don't just mean in instances where the girls' father is involved. I mean anytime they're experiencing strong emotions and situations.

Anyway, aside from all that I'm loving the story! Is Jay's hair colour blonde? Who was the girl in the photoframe? Does Jay live by himself? Can't wait to read more!
QuiteSavvy chapter 2 . 7/20/2010
Very nice. I really hope you'll continue this.
QuiteSavvy chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
Wow! I love this! I really hope you continue it! Please, just for me?

I'll write you a poem if you do...

tit for tat.

love,

Savvi
Vicky A chapter 15 . 7/15/2010
I simply love Jay. There is no other way to put that in a sentence. Hurry up and update please, even though I know you have a hectic life and I have read on your A/N.
Vicky A chapter 2 . 7/15/2010
So far it has been good. I like your story...it's very interesting...
AnemoneTaipa chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
this is really hilarious so far :]
Alanisaur chapter 15 . 5/7/2010
Why doesnt Lydia or any of the other characters got to school?
Me102 chapter 15 . 3/10/2010
just found this story yesterday and have already read all 15 chapters, lol. i REALY love it and wish you'd update! the last chapter was such a cliffhanger! cant' wait for more! :)
sexmeupXdollface chapter 15 . 3/8/2010
OMG! I love this story so ,much. I cant wait for more. PLZ HURRY
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